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Try The Flip Side When Looking At Story

July 31, 2012 By Kimberly A. Cook 1 Comment

by Kimberly A. Cook              (Twitter@ WarriorTales)

Trying to gain perspective about our own writing is like getting the right clothes on; it takes practice to know what really looks good for our body type. The same is true for editing our own work. When we are so close to what we are doing, forget objective, at least try for some distance.

One way to do this is to consider our story from a 180 degree view. What would happen if we considered the flip side?

Front-side of peacock at Petersen Rock Gardens in Redmond, Oregon

Everyone is familiar with the front side of a peacock, but how about the flip side? On my recent vacation I had fun taking this fellow’s picture. He was all about the strutting and performing for us, which can distract one from the real show. Imagine my delight when he turned around and I got the view below. A completely different perspective.

When a reader opens our story and begins to make assumptions about who we are as writers and craftspeople, let’s make sure even our backside looks good. Use correct grammar and punctuation, good story lines, fabulous characters and hidden secrets which move the character’s story arcs along to a rewarding conclusion.

If writing a contemporary light romance, consider how a mystery would impact your story. If we like writing horror, how would a sci-fi element change your characters? Right now I am reading “A Discovery Of Witches,” by Deborah Harkness and I love it; vampires, witches, daemons, time travel and all. Sometimes more is better.

Don’t box yourself into thinking your story is one-dimensional. Good writers torture their characters with problems and challenges, then clean it all up at the end with lessons learned. Think of your storyline as a playground and see what happens. If nothing else, it will help you feel stronger about your plot line or open new avenues you have not considered.

Remember to think about the flip side. Let’s make sure even our fuzzy peacock butts, er, story butts look good!

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Happy Olympics Watching With Your Bunny!

July 27, 2012 By Kimberly A. Cook 1 Comment

by Kimberly A. Cook           (Twitter@ WarriorTales)

It’s Quirky Friday again and time to watch the opening ceremonies of the Olympics. To celebrate the chance to turn most of America into couch potatoes while we watch really fit people compete, thought I had found the perfect video; a bunny eating popcorn. But wait, then I saw this lady showing off her prized Bunny and I knew the Gold Medal sized rabbit deserved the stage.

So enjoy the Olympics this weekend and imagine what this rabbit could do in the long jump! Happy Quirky Friday!

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Make The Reader Smell Pancakes

July 24, 2012 By Kimberly A. Cook 2 Comments

by Kimberly A. Cook                (Twitter@ WarriorTales)

The tried and true advice to show and not tell a story also needs to include smell. Of all the five senses we writers use to convey thoughts, emotions and senses, the old nose is at the top of the list to help immerse readers into an intimate memory. The oldest of the five senses we humans have, a whiff of a lover’s perfume or the scent of a grandfather’s Old Spice cologne takes us right back to that place and time.

Short stack of fabulous blueberry pancakes at the Black Bear Diner in Redmond, Oregon

When restaurants advertise their scrumptious dishes with full color pictures of food, their marketing departments would give their right nostril to be able to include smell. These blueberry pancakes I had on vacation were divine and the picture doesn’t do them justice.

If I describe the wafting aroma of warm powdered sugar rising like newborn doughnuts from the pancake batter with warm blueberries filling the air, you want to jump in the plate.

Never miss a chance to use a smell to trigger a memory or a feeling for our readers. The simple details can tell the most about a mood an author wants to evoke.  Studies have been done on the allure of such things as pumpkin, vanilla and licorice to raise amorous notions among our species.

For my money, blueberry pancakes belong on that list too. Perhaps I need to do some more research. Bring on the blueberries!

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And Now, Back To Our Troops

July 20, 2012 By Kimberly A. Cook Leave a Comment

by Kimberly A. Cook           (Twitter@ WarriorTales)

Always have to keep an eye on what our troops are up to all over the world. Being in the #military puts you in some pretty funky situations. Am I glad we didn’t have video rolling when I was making my stupid moves in the service. Here is a case of just trying to go about your day in Afghanistan on a first patrol to get acquainted with the countryside.

I can find walking a challenge on a sidewalk without the equivalent of a shopping cart of weight strapped to my back, so see how this Navy Corpsman handles it with grace. Read the description on YouTube from this March escapade. Happy Quirky Friday!

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Do You Have Time For Butterflies?

July 17, 2012 By Kimberly A. Cook 1 Comment

by Kimberly A. Cook            (Twitter@ WarriorTales)

The old cliché says the best things in life are free; clichés work for a reason. On my recent vacation we went for a walk along the Metolius River starting from Camp Sherman. This is a favorite spot of mine to take an easy stroll and shoot some pictures. It’s a photographer’s paradise.

Accompanying us on our trek were butterflies, everywhere. It was magic. Also a challenge to photograph as these beautiful buggers move!

Butterfly guide on the Metolius River.

I still haven’t looked at all the photos, but I have shots of partial butterfly wings, dirt pictures where butterflies were and the always helpful out of focus shot because the digital camera battery got tired. (Pack spare camera batteries too, I do.)

But as any photographer learns, keep taking pictures because you never know what will happen. The same goes for writing. Keep at it, keep trying, because some day you might have writing butterfly time and it would be tragic to miss the magic.

Author Elizabeth Lyon has a great saying, “cut wood and carry water,” when it comes to writing. Every type of writing we do and every experience in our lives adds to the writer we are and will become. Use it all. If we all keep writing, one day the butterflies will appear and writing magic will occur. So whether we walk by a stream or on city streets, be open to the creativity around us.

Watch for butterflies!

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Scrat And The Writer’s Life

July 13, 2012 By Kimberly A. Cook Leave a Comment

by Kimberly A. Cook            (Twitter@ WarriorTales)

It’s here! Ice Age 4 opens in theaters today and I can’t wait to watch the further adventures of Scrat. Since Scrat lives a writer’s life in constant pursuit of the publishing nut, or acorn in this case, Ice Age 4 appears to resemble the current upheaval in publishing. So if you’re a self-publishing author riding in the digital rodeo or a prehistoric squirrel trying to make sense of continental drift and change, let’s all learn from the way of Scrat. It couldn’t hurt. I hope. Happy Quirky Friday!

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